Saturday, May 28, 2011

Start of a story idea

This story is going to be a fantasy romance story as it seamed like it was going to be in that category of stories.
I have used the names Kanee and Alexander for the main characters names. Just rough ideas for names but might decide on something better. I also wish to say thank you to you all for welcoming to me so well to this forum.

Sorry this is a bit fragmented and I apologize again that it is.

Story Idea:

Setting there is an old restaurant an oriental one has an Asian style roof with dragons on all four corners of the roof. This also offers underwater dinning for customers as well. Iin this there is also a try with three Saki style containers on it and a small cup there to. Not sure if this could be she was waiting for someone. The restaurant is on old fashioned docks at night under the moonlight.

Out on the docks Kanee watches the moonlight sparkling on the water the docks are a large set in a port by the ocean. Off in the far distance she looks over seeing a shadow on a set of docks far off into the distance. "What is that?" She says moving closer.

Coming up closer onto the shadow it slowly takes on the form of a man sprinting down the long docks her shoes clattering against the old wood the only sound resounding in the deep dark night. A misty fog rolls over the waters and onto the docks clouding her vision. Looking beyond the fog she sees the glint of dark brown blonde hair.

"What it can't be?" She says sprinting even faster down the docks coming up on the figure she is stunned.

Light shines on his face "No!" She shouts as she moves closer she sits beside him running her hand down his pale face sweat built up at his forehead glitters in the moonlight.

Silently Kanee knows what she has to do moving several feet away from him on the docks. Her arms outstretched she summons her energy as she closes her eyes and concentrates. Opening her eyes Kanee keeps her eyes on Alexander, as a steady stream of glowing energy flows from her and into him.

Getting weak she keeps up the stream of energy, "What how is it I'm a wake?"

Taking a few minutes he doesn't notice Kanee giving him her energy until he moves to look at her. She herself is getting weak and pale and sweat building at her own forehead.

I am not sure the start of the story but this again is just a start of an idea please do let me know your thoughts and ideas. If any of you need help with ideas let me know and I'd be happy to offer my ideas in return.
Tekqueen

Saturday, May 21, 2011

Story Ideas

First Idea is this,
A gnome living in a community in the forest unseen by the eyes of man a noble gnome one of noble rank and wealth living there. Well respected and honored by the townspeople he is a pillar of their community.

In the forest wandering alone he hears the faint screams of a lady in distress. Seeing she is chased by a honorable man who claims to be her master and she his servant as she is fleeing from him she trips over a tree root and is certain she will be captured by the man. Upon coming up her she is in plain site but still he doesn't see or hear her at all.
Puzzled by this she wonders what happened, "I am Lord Savron I have saved you from this cruel man. I have kept you safe by my magic are you alright your not injured are you after you tripped over the tree root?"
"No I'm fine thank you but where are you? I am Lady Terragon so I once was called I guess it's just Terragon now." she says sighing.
"I am near by but you can't see me not just yet I mean no disrespect to you Lady Terragon as I will call you."
"It's alright I understand thank you for keeping me from him."
"I wish to see that your safe Milady take this you should see a large bag of coins for you to start a new life with go and build a great life for yourself."
She takes the coins and ends up becoming a very rich noble lady and frequently goes to the little grove where she first meet Lord Savron. They talk and start to become close friends. Thought one day she asks him to reveal himself to her to let her see him.
With a bit of hesitation he agrees and emerges from behind some of the twigs and branches on the forest floor when she catches sight of him she is startled to find that he is a gnome but still a handsome gnome. Leaving in disappointment and a bit of anger she goes back to her house. Though he calls for her to come back she mounts her horse and leaves.
Later while wondering through his town home he knows he has fallen in love with Terragon. Going to a witch he obtains a magic potion that will turn him into a man for a small allotted time. Though he will be a man he will not be able to talk to her.
This is where I am a bit stuck as I am unsure of how to have a if he doesn't win her heart what happens to him? I was thinking a merman but wasn't sure as he would be taken away from the gnome life he has.

My second Idea is:
As I am an Aquaman fan the alex ross justice version the artwork was great. Side note there sorry.
This idea is taking the Aquaman character and creating a unique spin to a classic fairy tale combining Aquaman with the Rapunzel story. Calling it Auatunzel combo of the two chracters and a play on the story. Following the the fairy tale story with elements of him finding his true love again. Thought this might be a continuation to my Legend of a king my first aquaman fan fic story. If you would like to read more let me know.

My thrid idea is:

In a large city a lady Fern is her name she living alone with a cat in her apartment she has found a mirror that allows her to go to another world. There she meets Merik a man she meet while visiting there as they have become great fiends. She only knows that he studies marine life and that is why he is always in the water. But yet that is not the reason he keeps himslef hidden from her. He hides a secret of his own under the saphire waves of the ocean.

Later she asks him to join her on the rock that she is laying on in the sea. Hesitating for a minute he grants her request and gets up on the rock with her. Startled by what she sees she faints in his arms. He explains that all though he is a merman that he still wishes to be a friend to her if she can accept that he is of the sea. Fern does accept him and they remain friends.

Her aunt later in the story a rich society snob decides it's time Fern take her place in society along with her. As Fern has no taste for any of it still she knows she has to go along with her aunt and agrees she come for a visit.

While her aunt is there visiting Merik uses magic to come be with Fern for an allotted time. Though the magic has turned him into a man he has taken a great risk in using it.

Aunt somehow would stop Fern from going to him as she know that Fern could do better than this man. Somehow she the aunt discovers the door way to the world he lives in. Stops Fern somehow not sure yet still writing the story. I am not sure what the risk would be to merik yet but I welcome any ideas and thoughts.

Thanks,
Tekqueen

Wednesday, April 27, 2011

Story Idea

This is an idea I have for a story have written a bit out for it but not much as I am still thinking about this one. Read and please do let me know what you think. :-)

Deep in the shadowy night one lone shaddow emerges out from many walking along the old brick streets. The soft calnking of his black leather boot heals echoing throughout the deep dark night. Moonlight is his only light in the emense darkness. Far in the distance thunder rolls across the sky lighenting flashing across the skies echoing in his own eyes. Walking alone the night his only companion, his campion the stars haning in the sky watching his every move from the starts above like yellow owls eyes. His steps long the brick streets are heavy in their own right for he holds a great secret one that has kept him appart from the world for years kept him isolated and alone. Staring off to his right he sees the endless dark blue of the ocean streched over miles over an endless horizon. Knowing that no matter how he tries to get away he will always be tied to the sea.

This is a start for a story that I am working on let me know what you think so far.

Tekqueen

Saturday, April 23, 2011

Aquaman Legend of a King (Fan Fiction Story)

Diving deeper and deeper into the deep endless blue of Safire Ocean he swims faster and faster enjoying the speed and the rush of the water around him as he swims. Enjoying the pure freedom of swimming any where he wants to the currents guiding him the warmth of the sunlight shining through the water as he smiles.

“The sunlight shining on the water then on me it feels so good right now.” He says to himself content and relaxed.

“What? What’s that?” He says stopping for a minute he closes his eyes focusing on the disturbance in the ocean.

An image of an awful storm comes to his mind seeing off the coast of an island a ship sailing on the waters trying to steer through the waves as he sees the crew aboard working franticly to keep the ship from capsizing in the ocean. The image of a beautiful lady on board the ship whom is trying to get below deck where it might be safer for her but the winds are strong as she struggles to get down blow deck. Strong winds blowing around her as her shawl blows overboard and into the ocean as it tosses around her deep dark long brown hair that glistens in the moonlight her eyes focused on getting to safety. Watching her closely he wants to make sure that she gets below deck safely the winds howling around her make her slide back on the deck a few steps blowing her towards the edge of the ship knocking her over board.

Hitting the water with such great force she is instantly knocked unconscious sensing she is unconscious and falling like a leaf from a tree to the bottom of the ocean. Quickly he swims faster and faster towards her position wanting to get to her as soon as possible. Catching up to her as she is falling towards the ocean floor he slows down his pace catching her before she hits the bottom of the ocean. Staring at her for a minute he is struck by her beauty and her kind heart that he can sense this even though she is unconscious in his arms.

Unconscious in his arms he talks to her as he races for the surface of the ocean knowing he needs to get her to the surface fast. “Your safe with me I’ll get you to safety here just listen to the sound of my voice let it calm you.” He says softly his voice melodic in tone.

Surfacing Aquaman sees a beach head a few miles away after a whale had told him he was close to land and where the lady had been traveling to which the whale had told him that it is her summer home.

Swimming with great speed he hurries towards the beach surfacing he carefully brings her to the shore. “Your safe miss your back home.” Saying with her Aquaman sees a strand of her long dark brown hair over her face. Reaching over carefully he moves the strand of hair from her face softly his hand brushes the side of her face. In a daze she opens her eyes for a minute before passing out from exhaustion knowing he really shouldn’t take her any further up to the castle that is her summer home. He can’t help his heart but to pick her up very carefully and carries her up to the castle. Carrying her up to the castle he is able to take her to the living room and carefully set her on the small sofa near the fireplace.

“You’re still very cold.” He says as he brushes his hand down her face again smiling and happy that she is safe he finds a blanket on a near by chair and covers her with it. “Your safe now sleep well.” Aquaman says as he silently leaves the castle leaving her to sleep. Even when leaving he can’t take his eyes off her as he moves towards the door turning back for a minute he stares at her. Knowing he can’t stay on land much longer as he is already starting to feel a little weakened he jumps back into the sea letting the waters renew him the energy reenergizing him as he swims. Still seeing her in his minds eyes still staring at her still not wanting to have left her there alone but yet he knew he had to leave her.

Swimming with great speed back to Atlantis Aquaman can’t get this beautiful lady out of his mind so distracted he almost runs into a whale.

“Sorry I didn’t see you.” He apologizes.

“It’s alright Aquaman how are you today?” the lady whale answers back.

“I’m fine just was a little distracted there for a second are you ok?”

“Oh yes I’m fine even you had ran into me I would have been ok I have four kids they run to me for sport sometimes just to give me a hard time.” She says smiling.

“How are the little ones?”

“Oh good they still cling to me like barnacles to the bottom of a boat. They love me dearly and I love them dearly. I know you can swim faster than me but would you like a ride back to Atlantis?”

“Sometimes I think it would be nice to slow down a bit yes that would be nice.”

“Great sit on my back and hold onto my fin and we’ll be off. Now tell me about this lady you can’t get out of your head Aquaman.”

“How did you know I had someone on my mind?”

“I know that look that distracted look Aquaman your thinking about someone you would like to see again and be with again but your not sure how you would as you can’t stay on land for long without becoming weak.”

“Sometimes I think you are too perceptive Dreelis.”

“We have been friends for years come talk to me Aquaman tell me about this beautiful lady you can get out of your minds heart.” She says with a grin.

Smiling Aquaman laughs a bit, “I think you know me too well Dreelis you have always been a good friend to me. I know also you’re not going to stop hounding me until I tell you.”

“Nope I won’t.” She says with a grin.

“I was swimming through the waters just getting away from Atlantis for a while just needed to get away for a while. Lavart has been giving me lesions on how to use my powers and trying to learn how to be a good king. I needed to get away from it to find some time to relax for a while.”

“Does Lavart know you’re gone?” she asks in an inquiring knowing tone that she knows that he doesn’t know Aquaman had left Atlantis for a while.

“No he doesn’t but I am king and I can go where I want to I needed to get out of the palace for a while. I have been working non stop all day and I wanted to go for a swim.”

“Ok enough stalling tell me about the lady you were starting to tell me about.”

“She is so beautiful Dreelis her long brown hair glistens in the sunlight her eyes are as blue as the oceans I live in. I was swimming in the oceans I sensed a disturbance in the water I don’t know what it was until I stopped for a second and concentrated with my telepathic abilities I was able to see in my minds eye what was going on. I saw a ship it was caught in a storm. Then I saw her she was trying to get back below deck she was struggling against the high winds. Trying to get below deck she was knocked overboard into the sea I couldn’t leave her I had to save her.”

“I swam to where she had fallen into the ocean I caught her in my arms and carried her to her summer home an old castle on the coast of and old city not too far from here.”

“You read her mind didn’t you to try to find out where she was going when after she had fallen overboard and into your arms.” Dreelis says in a wistful tone of voice smiling at the same time knowing she’s right.

“Yes I did but her thoughts are her own I only wanted to know where she lived so I could take her back to where she would be safe. She couldn’t be in the sea she had to get back to shore.”

“Now your mind is stuck on her and so is your heart Aquaman I have known you since you were a little Aquaboy swimming around the ocean and I know that you are head over fins for her.” Dreelis says smiling as he looks away for minute silently admitting that Dreelis is right.

“It’s amazing how you can read me like a book Dreelis.” Aquaman says smiling.

“Well were here Aquaman take care see you soon and if you see my little ones tell them it’s time to come back home.”

“I will thank you Dreelis.”

“Your welcome your majesty.” She says with a bow to him.

“You know you don’t have to call me that.”

“I know good night Aquaman.”

“Good night Dreelis.” He says waving as she leaves.

“There you are I have been looking for you all day where have you been?” Lavart says coming up to him.

“I had to get away for a while I greatly appreciate the lessons in using my powers but I needed to go out for a swim. I needed the time away from the palace and from being king.”

“Understandable but you still have things to learn come one more lesson today then you are free to do what you wish. Come follow me to the study there we will continue our work.” Lavart says as he turns to walk towards the study. Looking behind him he glances over his shoulder to see if Aquaman is following him smiling to himself as he is pleased to see that Aquaman is following him to the study.

The two footmen standing at the studies doors open the doors for them as they pass by entering the room. “Come Aquaman its time to learn more about your powers and how to use them wisely now you will learn how to further work with your telekinetic powers.”

Following Lavart Aquaman barley hears him as his mind is thinking about the lady he has saved from drowning in the ocean. The glint of her hair shining in the late sunlight her pale yet perfect face how blue her eyes were when she looked at him for that split second in time.

“Are you hearing me Aquaman? Please pay attention.” Lavart scolds him.

“Please could we continue this tomorrow I need to relax for the rest of the night please Lavart.”

Sighing Lavart can see he is tired and needs to relax for the rest of the night, “Alright I do see you are tired you may go for now. But you must be focused on your studies to prepare yourself to be king of Atlantis.” Lavart says with a noble tone his voice.

“I am focused on my studies but I need to stop studying for tonight my mind is tired and I can’t concentrate on this tonight.”

“I understand go relax and I’ll send one of the servants to bring you something for dinner. Good night your majesty.” Lavart says bowing to Aquaman.

Leaving the study Aquaman goes to his own private chambers to unwind from a long day of knowledge being crammed into his mind. Rubbing his forehead and running his hands trough his blond hair he sighs as he walks to the window and stands in front of it looking out over Atlantis the vast kingdom that is his making it official with the coronation ceremony later that month.

Standing in front of the large window he looks over his vast kingdom lost in thought he doesn’t see the royal maid coming in and leaving his dinner for him on a small desk by one of the windows surrounding his room. Silently the maid leaves him to let him have some time to himself without being a King to let the work of the day fade away as the sun slips below the horizon.

“I’m surrounded by people and the sea but I’m lonely I want to have someone beside me someday I need someone to share this all with I am so solitary and alone. My powers are great indeed but it seams like I can’t have the one thing that I have always wanted someday.” Aquaman says sighing as his thoughts fall upon the lady he saved earlier that day those deep dark blue eyes staring up at him for that split second he had lost all his senses in those eyes thinking for that one brief second that he could have something that he had only ever dreamed about.

“I want to see her again.” He says to himself as he walks over to the desk and sits down to enjoy his dinner.



Miles away on the shores the lady in the castle wakes up to find herself alone in the castle were she had been traveling to safe and sound. “How did I get here?”

“Last thing I recall is being tossed overboard by the howling winds of the storm brewing outside and now I’m here. This doesn’t make sense but I am here and safe.” Getting up she goes upstairs to her room. Taking a quick shower and cleaning up she turns in for the night to get a good nights sleep. The flash of a very kind face meets her in her dreams his face strong and yet kind and tender at the same time his blond hair glistening in the sunlight like golden threads his eyes as deep as the ocean itself.

Waking up to sunlight shining in through the soft curtains hanging in her room as the soothing sound of ocean wave hitting the rocks below the cliffs below where the castle sits. Going downstairs to the kitchen she is greeted by Travanna, “Good Morning Lady Dragon how are you this morning? I thought you were lost at sea after your ship was caught in that awful storm.” Travanna says rushing to Dragons side hugging her.

“I’m fine Travanna.”

“I am so happy to see your safe but how did you get here the ship was miles away from these shores.”

“I was saved by a man.”

“A man how could you have been saved by a man you were miles away from shore and the castle you must have dreamt it dear.”

“I was saved by a man his hair was blond and those eyes those deep dark blue eyes that were as deep as the ocean itself he was wonderful. His face strong but yet kind and compassionate and tender all at once.”

“You must have been dreaming come let me help you to the drawing room and you can sit by the fire and relax today. It’s cloudy outside so they weather isn’t sunny today so it’s a good day for staying inside though tomorrow it will be sunny so you can go outside and relax outdoors.”

“Thank you Travanna.” Dragon says smiling as she leans on Travanna for help in guiding her to the drawing room.

Entering the room Travanna says smiling, “There you are a nice arrangement of pillows by the fireplace thought I don’t recall them being there before but anyway you can relax and enjoy the warm fire.” Travanna says as Dragon settles down on the pillows making herself comfortable.

“Can I bring you anything Dragon?”

“Yes Travanna some warm tea would ne nice some Darjeeling tea would be great thank you.”

“Your welcome dear take it easy and relax by the fireplace no work for you today I mean it if I catch you working on some thing I’ll toss your books out the window.”

Laughing Dragon smiles, “I won’t I promise I don’t want to loose any of my books or any part of my vast history collection.”

“Wise choice Dragon.” Travanna says with a grin as she leaves Dragon by the fire to relax and possibly sleep for a few hours.

Lying on the pillows Dragon relaxes by the fire letting the warmth of the fire calm and relax her after such a trying evening. Curling up she soon falls asleep dreaming of the face of the man who had saved her from drowning. The image of the face she had seen that night comes to her mind yet again. Those deep dark blue eyes that seam to go on and on so beautiful and deep are those eyes she can’t get them out of her mind. Looking into those eyes she has seen such kindness and compassion and a noble honorability the mark of truly good man.

Travanna enters the room with a tea pot and a mug for Dragon, “I am sorry did I wake you?”

“No I was only dozing a little bit of a cat nap I suppose thank you for brining me the tea I need it to relax and calm me.”

“Your welcome call me if you need me Dragon.”

“I will thank you.” Dragon says as she pours herself a cup of tea and curls up in the blankets and on the pillows again. Closing her eyes she sees those eyes again those deep dark blue eyes that seam endless in their depth and kindness and honorable character that lies behind them. Sighing to herself she says, “Those eyes I want to see those eyes again.”



“Good morning your majesty.” Lavart says as Aquaman walks into the study coming for a lesson on how to use his powers.

“Good morning Lavart.”

“Now today we will start today’s lesson how to control and use your powers. Today’s lesson is about control this will test your telekinetic powers and help you to make them stronger so you can use them better.”  Lavart says instructing Aquaman on how to use his powers.

“Ok now you will need to concentrate focus your mind and try to move a book off the shelf the one entitled History of the Kings of Atlantis.” Lavart instructs.

Concentrating he looks at the book slowly it moves off the shelf floating towards him hanging in mid air in front of him. Picking it up out of mid air he sets it safely on the desk.

“Very good Aquaman very good now we’ll try something more challenging let me think for a minute.” Lavart says turning away for a minute.

Taking advantage of his distracted attention Aquaman’s thoughts drift back to the lady he had saved. “Those eyes so beautiful and endearing I don’t know her well but I can easily sense that she has a good kind caring heart a true lady indeed. I want to see her again.”

“Aquaman please pay attention to my instructions and my guidance on how to use your powers to make yourself an even greater king. Your mind is else ware today we will start lessons again tomorrow.”




Leaving the grand study Aquaman walks towards the one place in the castle where he can truly be alone a small balcony over looking a few of the kingdom. Were a small stream runs through it. This is one of the places he goes when the truly wants to be alone her e no one would ever bother him here.

“I want to see her again so badly to make sure she is safe now to have someone outside of this kingdom and the seas to know me would be wonderful.” He says sighing thinking it’s only an amusing thought at best.

“Your mind isssssss else ware besides here on matters of state is it not your majesty?” An eerie snake like voice says.

“Who said that?”

“Over here your majesty in the stream please do come over I wish to talk to you if I may.”

Seeing an eerie looking head just above the water staring at him with dark green eyes it says to him, “Majesty I have come here as I have sensed your thoughts and wanted to try to help you.”

“You were listening in on my thoughts?”

“No never I only knew you were thinking of someone on land that you wished to see again and in your present form you can’t stay with her for long.”

“No I couldn’t I would needs to be in water I can’t stay out of water for a long time.”

“I know someone who can help you be with her again I only wish to help you I know my appearance is a bit ugly but I wish to help this great king of Atlantis.”

“Who is this person you will be guiding me to?”

“Oh don’t be concerned your majesty this is a truly wise and wonderful lady with great powers of her own she uses them to help people for the betterment of the lives in the sea. Come now great king follow me I will lead you to her so she can help you your majesty.”